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William F. Edwards's avatar

Thank you, I'm glad you like it. Which character has you most intrigued so far?

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Winston Malone's avatar

This is so awesome!

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William F. Edwards's avatar

Thank you.

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The Beast with Five Fingers's avatar

this is SO IMPRESSIVE - genuinely has to be one of the most labor-intensive chose-your-own-adventure stories ever written

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William F. Edwards's avatar

Thank you. And yes, yes it is. Which fighter has your interest the most at the moment?

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The Beast with Five Fingers's avatar

feeling Quiahuitl at the moment - on her character profile "chocolate, being revered, power" is very promising

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William F. Edwards's avatar

Yeah that's a relatable list of favorite things lol. Hope you enjoy her story.

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St John Starling's avatar

I desperately want to know more about the Talpmen, in general.

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William F. Edwards's avatar

For them sharpening their claws is a social thing and while they see great in the dark their day vision is the worst of the main races.

For this setting I've generally avoided making any sort of specific 'talpman nation' or 'orc nation' where each culture generally has at least two main races, so it can be a little hard to talk about them relative to other fantasy races. The talpmen fighters here, Quiahuitl and Metrophanes (who both have their full story out), are from different cultures for example.

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J.M. Ransom's avatar

Fun format!

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