I love this! very pleasing, thank you for sharing it 🙏 you've done something so impressive in reproducing that elusive, poetic quality of fables and creation myths
This is great. It’s really hard to write a myth that sounds like a myth, but this reminds me a lot more of ancient writing than anything modern. I’m really impressed.
Thank you. There's something in the way some myths are written that appeals to me in a different way from modern stories, glad I was able to convey that.
I love this! very pleasing, thank you for sharing it 🙏 you've done something so impressive in reproducing that elusive, poetic quality of fables and creation myths
I'm grateful for comments like this. Happy you enjoyed the story.
This is great. It’s really hard to write a myth that sounds like a myth, but this reminds me a lot more of ancient writing than anything modern. I’m really impressed.
Thank you. There's something in the way some myths are written that appeals to me in a different way from modern stories, glad I was able to convey that.